Revised version of My thoughts about Greek mythology changes.....
I have
always just disliked the idea or topic of Greek Mythology. Maybe cause it’s not
real. But something changed how I thought, it was a book. My L.A assignment is
the read Percy Jackson and the Lightning Thief. I was stunned! How
could I ever read THAT!! I wondered. I was scared and
disappointed that I might not understand what was going on in the
book. Well, I have to face it, I
thought to myself. So I leaped on my couch, thinking that that this book would
not interest me at all. I was anxious. I picked up the book and stared at the
cover. It was interesting though I didn't know what it was. I opened the book
and started reading. I read with no interest at first, but the more I read, the
deeper I went into the book. It was so intense. When I finished the first
chapter, I wanted to read more. I couldn't believe it! I enjoyed and liked the
chapter. I liked how the author used different words and descriptions to catch
the reader’s attention. I started reading chapter 2 and kept on enjoying the
book. I am currently on chapter 5 and the book is pretty good up till
now.
Compliment: I like how you underlined the title of the book and wrote how much you liked it.
ReplyDeleteConnection: I thought the book was going to be really boring but after I read it, it was a little bit fun.
Constructive Comment: I think you should check your writing with spellcheckplus.com because you wrote "My L.A assignment is the read," but it's suppose to be "My L.A assignment is to read," and "So I leaped on the couch," and you forgot the comma after the so.