What should I write about?
It was a very quite atmosphere. Everybody in my L.A class was assigned to write for fifteen minutes for their " Slice of Life"."Arghhhhhhhhhhh," I fumed! Thinking of what to write about is impossible. I I am literally STUCK trying to figure out what to write about for my "Slice of Life." I tried brainstorming ideas over what happened over the weekend.That failed because nothing really exciting happened to me. I tried making a "Love and Hate" list about school. Well, guess what, that failed too! I also tried relating to my family's weekends but nothing seemed to be working because we all had different schedules. Finally I just sat in sorrow and stared at my classmates completing their assignment. Suddenly a great idea approached my brain. I immediately grabbed my pencil and my book and started writing. Ideas just started popping into my head. Can you guess what I was writing about? I was writing about how I couldn't think of what to write for my "Slice of Life".
I like how you followed said is dead and I like how you wrote how you tried to write one. I think you should use the Dialogue Rules.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used really good words after you speak which means you were using the paper that Ms. Caroline gave you.
ReplyDeleteI also like how you described what was around you not just your feelings.
Maybe next time you could try to write about something with more action.